Which Character sounds prettier? - kates strawberry
I am a story, and I see that the character I should use:
Kate tall and slim, strawberry blonde with bright, thick hair. With dark blue eyes, change into a pale blue. Perfect eyebrows and a straight nose. Fair and beautiful skin. An oval face shape that works perfectly with the functionality. Her long legs, she looked perfectly good athletic muscles. The curved shape, but thin, did what every girl. He had full lips pink, based on the comprehensive and in him, but perfectly formed.
Or Brooke
Brooke "Tall, slender, with the body of a dancer as the perfect curves in all the right places in perfect proportion. Long silky blonde hair, a perfect face, beautiful, big, long gray bound and icy blue eyes, a dark blue border. Perfektaristocratic nose was simple and delicate, perfectly full pink lips. Porcelain skin with a golden glow
Friday, February 19, 2010
Kates Strawberry Which Character Sounds Prettier?
1 comment:
I like the character. Look how often the word "perfect" in their descriptions. These are not descriptions of real people but caricatures.
Give your characters some physical defects that have deficits of their personality. This will be interesting.
To fight only a small tip of a human author.
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